What needs clarification in the paper is the definition of the term "stronger effect"
In a linear regression set up, the estimated coefficients measure the marginal effect on the conditional expected value of the DV of a regressor while keeping the rest of the regressors fixed.
Assume then that
$$\frac {\partial \hat E(Y_1\mid \mathbf X)}{\partial X_1} = \hat c_1 > \hat c_2 = \frac {\partial \hat E(Y_2\mid \mathbf X)}{\partial X_1}$$
For example, say that $ \hat c_1 =10\hat c_2$. Now assume that the conditional means of the DV's over the regressors sample means are
$$\hat E(Y_1\mid \mathbf X=E(\mathbf X)) = 100\hat E(Y_2\mid \mathbf X=E(\mathbf X))$$
Then the elasticities , evaluated say at the regressor sample means are
$$\varepsilon_{Y_1,X_1} =\frac {\partial \hat E(Y_1\mid \mathbf X)}{\partial X_1} \cdot \frac {E(X_1)}{\hat E(Y_1\mid X=E(\mathbf X))} \\
= 10\hat c_2 \cdot \frac {E(X_1)}{100\hat E(Y_2\mid \mathbf X=E(\mathbf X))} = 0.01\varepsilon_{Y_2,X_1} < < \varepsilon_{Y_2,X_1}$$
While the marginal effect of $X_1$ on $Y_1$ is 10-fold higher in absolute terms, it is just 1% of the percentage effect that $X_1$ has on $Y_2$ (as measured by the elasticity).
This was just an example to show that the concept of "stronger effect" must be carefully defined and be justified in the context of the specific real-world phenomenon under study -it may be the case that the absolute and not the percentage effect is meaningful/relevant after all.
Your concern regarding whether the difference is statistically significant is also legitimate -but again, one must construct the framework into which one can formally test whether the difference is statistically significant or not.
Another methodological issue is that if $Y_3 = Y_1Y_2$ for internal consistency we have that
$$Y_3 = (a_1 + b_1X_1 + c_1X_2 + d_1X_3 + e_1)\cdot (a_2 + b_2X_1 + c_2X_2 + d_2X_3 + e_2)$$
If you carry the multiplication, you will obtain the internally consistent specification for the $Y_3$ DV. If then you match this specification with the postulated one in the paper, you will see that all sorts of relations between the coefficients arise, but also, squared regressors and interaction terms that are being "hidden" in the $e_3$ error term, creating endogeneity of the regressors, and hence undermining the validity of the estimation in the $Y_3$ equation.