Can you check please my proof of this inequality? It's all right?

Can you check please my proof of this inequality? It's all right?

Most of your proof is right, while some errors occur in part b).
First, you need to prove that $|x+x_1+\cdots+x_n|\color{red}\ge|x|-(|x_1|+\cdots+|x_n|)$.
Also, it should be $|x|\le|\color{red}x+x_1+\cdots+x_n|+|-x_1|+\cdots+|-x_n|$.