しかし、許可をもらわないでコピーした漫画をインターネットで読む人が増えているため、漫画全部の売り上げは少なくなっています。
However, because the number of people who read manga on the internet – that has been copied without permission – is increasing, total manga sales are decreasing.
No problem with understanding (I hope), but 漫画全部の売り上げ looks weird to me. I feel it ought to be 漫画の全部の売り上げ. Is this a typo? If not, why is it okay to write it like this?
名詞+全部 is almost as common as 名詞+の+全部
Think of it as akin to the difference between ‘All manga’ vs. ‘All of the manga’. There is really no functional difference. If the case for a difference had to be made, it would likely be a slight reduction in formality when not using the particle.
This applies to 全員, 全て, 半分, etc.
漫画全部
漫画家全員
料理全て
参加者全員
気持ち半分
Two similar expressions, one using の and one without:
財産全部、地獄に持って行ける訳じゃない。
その財産の全部を出資するものとする。
